amazing?
this is 9 minutes and 26 seconds of awfulness
amazing?
this is 9 minutes and 26 seconds of awfulness
thanks!
Notes are offkey
First time attempting a melody its alright... it really doesnt have a set mood, its almost like you just pressed notes on the piano roll. Listen to the pitches, if your using major keys, stick with majors and use minors when neccesary, it doesnt flow yet, you;ll get it eventually.
hahah
I guess this is cool and whatever.... its really "creative", but I mean you could always download the accapellas, but you do have a good voice... ill give you a 5/5 for your effort!
hahaha thanks
effort was all i was really going for in the end... until i have enought skills that i can use them
what do you mean download the accapellas, by the way?
goooood shit
representin the 4.20
This beat is mad good, and luda on the chorus is sweet. Definitly one of the best hip hop beats on newgrounds and one of the best vocals... Everything is good dude, not much to say 5/5
thanks man im glad u liked it happy 420
Nice
For your first sumbission this is pretty good... certain things need to be fixed but, what you have here is good, as you progress in making music I guarantee you will look back at this song and just realize how much better you could make it that day. Its a unique trance song, I think your transitions can be a bit better, and the fat saw synth isa bit annoying....my last complaint is the drums, there good, but they could be alittle more trancey - possibly a stronger kick
No time for along review, but great job none the less 10.10 5/5 , check out my new song Energy if you have a chance? peace
Ya, I have to fix the kick. It was nice and low on my comp at home, but when I played it on head phones there was nothing. Just to let you kow though, the kick has some good beating... you just can't hear it unless you got a good stero setup. I'll work on some of the transitions... I agree on that point... Thnx!
I'm lookin' at Energy now...
Nice
At first, I was really thinking this song, was going to be "spooky" and alittle on the dark side. And it is somewhat, but to me atleast it has this sad feeling to it, and some happy areas, and then some dark... If you really think when listening to this piece it brings back memories... My only complaint is the abrupt intro of certain instruments other than that, it was excellent, 5/5
Yeah, I was trying around with mastering in this song, and now that I listen on other speakers/ my headphones I notice some of it was...a bit iffy =P.
Thanks for the review, I really appreciate the feedback on it.
P.S. I really had trouble with the horns at like 1:15, I was trying to get an overblowing sound out of them, instead it just came out as abrupt as you said =P.
~TheWisestMagi~
ims suchaa n00b with teh fl studio zomgggg
dj unknwon you are great artist newgrounds , i work your love! it is fantastik ogmgg ogm can you giv meh some lessonz on this so called "fruity loops"
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Dj-Unknown
ehhh
Everything original, but the melody... this is a midi :/ give some credit? a remix at least....and maybe you wouldnt get bad votes...I cant think of the midi right now...but ive used it before, im thinking dj dean anyway good try....
if you say so but i don't even know how to use midi file in FL i only use piano roll... but i can admit i use basshunter melodie but hey that was my first trance attempt.
Nice, nice...
This is different, the melody seems very original..and I like it to say none the less... and I really enjoy your break its perfect, to change up the variety and what not, and it has that nice deep bass you like to hear with the arp and the high pitch dance synth in there... good work with that... then of course the build up back into the melody -- you introduced it back pretty well, couldve been better?, I felt for 3:15 this song seemed too short!!! strange, but great job! ... check by my page if you have time and maybe review my song Energy, any review is appreciated! Have a good day and keep doing what you do
Thanks so much for the awesome review! I personally think this is one of my sloppyier songs =P.
Thanks again!
(Checkin out your song right now)
whatsss gooodd
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Miami, FL
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